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Okay, so what was with the incredibly poor writing and editing of this episode? How come when we were supposed to be in Lauren and Sark's POV we got so very, very much repeated footage of Syd and Vaughn? Not to mention of, say, Marshall, who obviously didn't belong in their POV? Plus the randomly placed scenes with Sloane and the psychiatrist?

And why do I not care? Hee. Sark could have fabulous chemistry with a wet burlap bag. ([livejournal.com profile] satyadasa: Are you calling Lauren a wet burlap bag? Me: Yes. Yes, I am.) He loves to be abused, and am I complaining? No. No, I am not. But I want to see some better writing soon. We cannot coast on our goodwill forever.

Er, yes, other things happened, didn't they? Sloane is so not Sydney's father. He just isn't. He can insist that it's possible, and delude himself into believing that it's true, and this is all very well and good as a plot point, but ... is not is not is not.

Why does Marshall have the same model of cheap-ass inkjet printer I got for free with my computer in 2001 that never worked because it got damaged en route to my dorm? Shouldn't he print to a spiffy CIA laser printer? :D

I should bring my laptop with me and jot down the silly comments I want to make during episodes ... but I don't ...

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